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Far be it from the laws of this world
Placed upon a scale and measured by ones age
If given in love, passion and affections

Would be better for a youth to learn and love pure,
rather than to be used, betrayed and lied too

In this world we live would seem not so,
for to have a youth suffer would seem the rule

If the love be of enduring and of quality,
why then judge it on merely age

If the love be of lustful and selfish,
why is it ok if the age considered right

Judge not the essence of love on age,
seek the truth of it and allow it to be seen

If it be pure and right,
do not label it unjust

If it be sinful and wrong,
cast it away and punish it

To claim to know the feelings and thoughts of youth,
when you yourself have forgotten its ways is presumptuous

Allow the loving hearts of youth be free to love,
as you yourself are blinded by worldly things

Judge not the soul by the years it has lived,
see within it and allow it to be true to itself


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More than seems, less than known...


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The following comments are for "To Love A Youth"
by MagnusVonMythos

Beautiful
Very beautiful. I am moved by the expression and thought that your mind created.
I'll be reading some more of this.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

Thank you for your approval
It is my soul in full, which I expose in such a honest and loving way.


I have met a most wonderful youth which has showen me love unlike any other person ever has. Thus I have no reason not to return such a pure and loyal love as she hath given me.

( Posted by: MagnusVonMythos [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )





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