The following comments are for "Unforgiven" by Charmr
And here I sit thinking this was about Jane Fonda and the Viet Nam war...How dense am I? How are ya doin Charmr? Kacee
Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 9, 2006
But then you always are. Smiles!!
Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 9, 2006
Cool takes, in comments above..We come perception influenced..
First impression was of relationship gone sideways..
Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 9, 2006
. . . is what I thought of, and I expect you did too. ;)
Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 9, 2006
Mustard Gas Seed
This piece can turn the reader around on its tight pivot and launch him into any number of directions, but they all seem to lead to the same place.
Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: September 10, 2006
Good Jane, Bad War
The great thing about these four little words is that they're easy for even a drunk to remember. Count this as one poem that I can take with me anywhere, even to the bar where my computer is not allowed to go.
I also saw the Jane Fonda / Viet Nam connection that Kacee made, though this could mean numerous things. Loved this, seriously.
Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: September 12, 2006
Thanks so very much for the very nice comments. I am spending most all of my art time now on my music, but I should have more time for poetry in the near future. I am hoping anyway.........Romay
Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: September 20, 2006
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