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life's pathways beckon
moments joined into ages
cloaked by time's mantle

friends not forgotten
re-union approaches
time's pathway beckons

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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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The following comments are for "Time for Time"
by ivordavies

Time For Time
How true. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Tide and Time
Wanda, Lucie,

Thanks for commenting, yes I have been away toooo long and unfortunately time is a dimension in the plane we find ourselves in.

Poetry has been lost to me lately as I only have one physical mind and that has been overflowing with what needed doing in my working life. (Though I must say this has been fulfilling and fun)

Time, my haiku while drawing together times mantle was also a promis to myself that I will start writing again so I hope to be around a bit and avoid getting buried under!

Thanks again,

Ivor

ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Back To Portal
Ivor- Good to hear voice.

Enjoyed read,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Nice to hear
Can't wait till you're around more.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

etenal moments
past, future, present
moments form eternity
time stays forever

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: September 13, 2006 )

eternal moments
or even "eternal moments"

Bobby, Viper, Tina,

Thanks for popping by I really must get pen to paper to stop all the typo's I seem to be producing!

I have one I wrote while I was on a plane to Turkey that I must have a look at to see if it makes sense or is worth posting so I'll see if this kick starts me again....

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: September 13, 2006 )

Moments with Ivor
Ivor, so nice to see you!
Read somewhere recently about a fourth dimension, exemplified by an ant crawling on a cable line unaware of the fact that it went round and round as well as forward, through space and time.
Glad to see you around this particular cable line! Hi to your brother who is also missed-

your getting pretty good at haiku, rhyme master-

best thoughts-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 13, 2006 )





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