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To the beautiful people
Who died that day
In an extreme and horrific way,
Our hearts were shattered
As we watched your demise-
Innocent darlings fell from blue skies.

You touched every heart
And brought tears to all eyes
As we shivered with fear
And whispered goodbyes.

We'll never forget you
Or the price each one paid
If only it hadn't happened that way.
Sleep tenderly dear heros.


My tribute, written the day of the tragedy.




------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Twin Towers"
by Char

Twin Towers
No we wont forget. Thank you for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Twin Towers
My heart goes out to all those who lost loved ones on this day...this day will remain in my heart for two other reasons...mom and dad were married on that day 1944...and we buried my dad on same 1998...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Still hurts
Char, it is so good to see you here. 9-11 5 years already? Unbelievable. You captured the hurt well. Will it ever not hurt?

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Thanks Everyone!!!
Yes, I am back...maybe more than ever, maybe less but I wanted to put this one on; I meant to last year and didn't get to it. It is good to see everyone and especially when the sting smarts more than ever with the rememberance of that horrific day.

It is nice to see you all; nicer than words can say. Thank you Wanda, Nitz Kitty, it is my grandson's birthday as well. Nae, if you get any prettier I will need a pill for it...lol!!! Gorgeous pic of you. Lucie!! Ahhh, Lucie!! It is good to see you!!! I am never very far away.

Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Thank you Char
Ah you are so sweet Char, thank you! Say hi to Charmr for me, or better yet tell him to come back too!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )





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