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A gray evil structure
With holes to let in air,
And we, like rats,
Are stuffed in this cage.

With just enough food
To let us live,
And water so muddy
Which we do not drink,

But the doors are closed
Broken down last week,
The only way out
Is through prayer and sin.

We are alone,
In this Torment Block,
Like gray little Rats,
locked up in a cage.

Writes 24 Hours a day, 7 days a week. As long as he gets his free can of Coke.

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