The following comments are for "Nocturne" by Dew Of Blood
A few months ago, I was struggling to write a poem about my father, but the emotion I was trying to get across was elusive and hard to grasp, and the meaning got lost in the translation. I think you have pegged what I was trying to get at. This is short but profound, almost shocking in its simplicity. I am looking forward to more from you - thanks for posting.
Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: September 8, 2006
Damn good poem. Perfect length, everything it needs is there. Mmmm. You're on my favourites list now.
Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: September 9, 2006
sparing simplicity that says a great deal and packs a profound emotional punch. Enjoyed this.