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Once in the land of OOZ, there lived a king who wanted to protect his kingdom. There were very few people in the kingdom,many of those were elders and left overs from the migration. Yet, on the other side of the mountain the kingdom of OOP existed. The king with his very fertile imagination ,started the idea of getting a protector. It was secret and forbidden for any-one to know about this protector, which the king said protected him.
As it would go in the course of life, the protector grew in stature. The people felt secure, knowing the protector, was there to protect them from OOP. Onward the stature grew. People would speak quietly and then brazenly, about the protector ,that the king said was secure. They became embolden buy the security of this protector and his great stature now. Soon they were comming close to the border of OOP. They knew there was GOLD and much of it.
With the assurence of the security of the protector, the people crossed over into OOP, for the GOLD. With the commotion. The warriors of OOP'S came after the thieves. Seeing the OOP'S warriors ,they ran ,yelling for the protector. PROTECTOR-PROTECTOR,call the protector, the king hearing this ,came out of the castle. He was wearing his emblossed-PROTECTOR- {which he had told one of the people about}. With that sudden knowledge ,the people of OOZ fled. Leaving the KING alone, with his PROTECTOR-[on].

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