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one, you know you are
two, a superstar
three, and what I do
four, is worship you
one, you are the king
two, do anything
three, I'd kill for you
kill myself for you

you are my god, you are my king
you are my ruler, my everything
you are my mother, you are my bride
you are my conscience and
you've taken my life
my life

one, you are the key
two, unlocking me
three, the only way
four, my peace today
one, I lost myself
two, can't run for help
three, no help to find
in your perfect mind

you are my god, you are my king
you are my ruler, my everything
you are my mother, you are my bride
you are my conscience and
you've taken my life
my life

and when all is said and done
you and I are always one
anything you told me to
I could take a life for you
you're the only thing that's true
to me

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http://twothirdsleft.wordpress.com


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The following comments are for "my life"
by JonnyT

JonnyT's Life
Been checking out lyric submissions..

This would be good crowd participation piece: "One!"...

Are you putting music to them?

Let it rock..

RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Interesting.
Unhealthy, but interesting.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )





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