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Fold my itty bitty love,
and stick it in the closet.
Drain my itty bitty love,
and watch it pour from the faucet.

Itty bitty
nitty gritty

Grab my nitty gritty love,
and wear me when your cold.
Pour my nitty gritty love,
and drink from me until old.

I can be nitty and I can be gritty,
but my heart is itty bitty,
becayse I'm really small, and ye tall,
and only a little heart, that's all,
But I'll give you my all,
all, all, and all,
Because your my all,
all, all and all.

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Art is addicting, an addict am I,
truth is I, the truth am I, the truth a lie!


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The following comments are for "Little heart"
by Siah

Little heart
Sounds like someone is sucking you dry...taking all you can give and you are getting nothing in return...moving poem...Now let me be Dear Blabby...time to move on...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 8, 2006 )

The Siah Tradition Continues!...
Your talent with love poems knows no end or boundaries...keep on, Siah, because I want to keep feeling the love! Great job!

-Aubri

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: September 8, 2006 )

Little heart
like the contrast between the twee itty bitty and the harsh nitty gritty. Also, there's just something pleasing about the "closet"/ "faucete" rhyme. Though I'm not sure what.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

Happy
I've been really giddy and happy these days. Maybe childish even. Anyway, thanks for the comments. And Shannon, I do care to know what the connection is! We should discuss this matter.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: September 10, 2006 )





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