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Upon her gown is spread my love,
each breeze floats me higher,
and one day my ruffled love
will increase and crease like fire.

-Pearls & Diamonds
scarlet rubies and emerald dreams.

From each whisper comes love,
her elgance is pure air,
and if one day I call her love,
till boredom and death fare.

-Silk and thunder
tall hopes & nightmares

Yet is there no notice for love,
no announcing stench in the wind?
and when one day hints at love
it does less to help, and more to offend.

-Pearls & Diamonds
tall hopes & dark nightmares.

For each bud blossoms love,
and its pollen litters the breeze,
I hope on day my breath is love
so that my pollen will spread with ease.

-Silk and thunder
scarlet rubies and emerald dreams.

I'm the flower on your windowsill, my love,
and my thorns can puncture the sky
but, if one day you but tend to me my love,
then each moment of you would float me high.

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The following comments are for "Queen of Queens"
by Siah

Queen Of Queens
another one well done.Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

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