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Your kiss;
Bathe me in tears of the moon,
and watch the moonlight peel my skin.
I'm Free,
I'm falling,
you are, you are, so much moon,
light upon my face
and your eyes sparkle stars
across a heaven full of me
I'm falling
you are, you are, so much moon
your eyes gaze upon mine
starbright moolight
and you bring your lips so close,
I'm falling
Your kiss;
A silent pulse of moonlight,
peeling my love layer by layer.
I'm free.

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The following comments are for "Pulse"
by Siah

A wonder feeling to be falling and being free
thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 9, 2006 )

My veins contract when I read this poem!
Love truly does feel like freefalling-without the fear of landing on your head and breaking your neck. The imagery does indeed make my pulse rise!


( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

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