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The Fat Revolution
Is now being blamed on Evolution

No more swinging from the Trees
We just walk to the Table on Bended Kness

Our Hunter days are Gone Forever
What?Fast Food can Kill you....Yeah...Whatever!

Guzzle Down the Sugar Water
I need it to wash down the Sugar Food

I`ve hung up my Spear,Fetish and Loin Cloth
Now I resemble more a Five Toed Sloth

Don`t bring me Down with your talk of Sweat
I haven`t even started the main course Yet

Get Out of Here with your phoney Diet
Boiled Beef and really should try it.

But really folks get on your bikes
just look in the one likes

The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?

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