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empty we come
to be what we see
empty our hands
before you we stand
so what's this life all about?
you see what's real but
reality is empty

empty we go
to see what we were
empty our hands
before you we stand
so that's all?
empty.

------
Kellie Lachata


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The following comments are for "empty."
by ducktape

Empty
To me this says...we came into this world with nothing (bare , naked) and we leave the same way... life is what we make of it...very good ...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

PM
I sent you a PM (private message) to compliment your writing. Hope you saw it.


bw

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: September 13, 2006 )





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