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when she goes
what's held by
drawn to
leaves with her

temporary
vehicles
being just that
energy unmassed

through porta nuova
all
big to small
her entourage

as one
dust to dust
to new
uncomprehensible

beginning


sunryupsyched
0300090206

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

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The following comments are for "one hot muse"
by Bobby7L

HOT, HOT , MAMMA
Bobby...SUPER NOVA...short and to the point...wonderful...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

Kacee/ Sunryupsyched
Kacee-
Came home from tough day at office (Manage large biz, silent partner in another. Am busy man. -*Wear boxers..), hoping not to have to explain this poem. This was/is good start..

Thought this one, as fell asleep last Friday night. Published elsewhere..Then E-carded to several friends..Decided to post, since it completes circle:.."size matters"..NEWS FLASH (comment at "size...")..."Doofus Dissertations..."

Figured, as life nurturing vehicle, why not make Sun female..and allow for possibility of its having transcendent consciousness level...All living before us (now as dust in orbit), moons planets, even Pluto, along with us ..becoming one with Sun..through new gate..(Not end)..to uncomprehensible beginning..

Lunatic at large,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

one hot muse, bobby7L
Even the dust that is left behind is but energy thought form. I like this one.

( Posted by: JScript18 [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

Lucie/JS- A light sleeper
Lucie- Strange you would mention film..I saw this one, more than word-formed it, as neared sleep.

Thank you so much. Your taking time here is appreciated more than you know.

JS- Thank you kindly.

A new represented Lit persona?. Not up to speed with writing. Will look for. Welcome to Lit., if applicable..


Out of a dream, but not quite awake,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

Mrs. Scotumberg sent me to look at what you got, Bobby7L
Good work honey. What's a drag queen without her entourage and pretty friends to call upon?

( Posted by: Castanedalupe [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

A mess.
Seem to recall you enjoyed recent lyric of mine..
See: "Starring Us"...and: "What Angels Do", if wish..

Thanks for looking.

Lunatic at large,
7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 6, 2006 )

Temporary tongues
The terrible tangle time ties taunts thinkers today. To those toilers: thanks.

~ Tohn

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

Totally
Timing.



treboR

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

Hot
I have to agree with Kacee Amd Lucie. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

wanda
"It's not easy being a total psychotic." -Zelig

Thank you kindly..

at large,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

porta nuova
R.W.-

Beautiful. Even before I read your explanation, I sensed a feminine ambiance. I've never thought of the sun as female; for me, it's the moon: Swollen, as though ready to deliver child, by next week her infant will be gone. How easy it is for her to shed that baby, every month, and transpire new each time. But, after perusing this piece, I now view the sun as a nurturing mother, tucking in her children, waking them up for a new and unexpected tomorrow through new doors (porta nuova).

Excellent.

Best,
Ariana

( Posted by: Ariana [Member] On: October 3, 2008 )

Ariana...of transcendent consciousness
Ariana-
For your reading and thoughts, much thanks.

Ciao,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 5, 2008 )





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