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It takes courage to jump out into air only, without wings, as if you had them. Knowing absolutely nothing about flying or much about air either, but you do it any way.
Review: stupid, disconnected,disturbing, unclear, no resolution.
These are hopeful signs that the piece is Ireal art and not an airplane. An air plane has wings, flys through the air and you do too in your seat as a passanger. For some that is fine, but for the Ireal writer it is not fine enough.
Tell me some thing you know nothing about, tell me in a topsy-turvy way. get courageous, and tell me what it's like to fly with out wings.
There is a place for this kind of writing, it is'nt an easy style, but I find it essential to art, and if mastered, one of the most thought provoking, insightful, and growth producing experiences. Uncomfortable, disturbing, yes, but also it can carry a beauty, a moment, a touch of realism that goes far beyound any particular thing you have ever experienced befor.

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The following comments are for "Ireal Flight: Flying Without Wings"

And, that's all I have to say about that.

You genuinely lost me there...


( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: November 18, 2002 )

nice write
this is definitily not for simple minds
wow real strong feelings here

( Posted by: jenniferzlomke [Member] On: November 18, 2002 )

also confused
I'm with Jasmine on this one. What is going on here?

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: February 7, 2003 )

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