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It looked at me
It's eyes wide open.
So innocent
Like a newborn baby.

I took it
In my arms,
Held tightly
Close to my heart.

A silent purr
Came to my ears,
It was as pleasant
As the morning sun.

Such a beautiful creature,
Which was not mine,
I would give a truck of gold
To make it stay with me.

But when the time has come,
And the sun went down,
I had to leave it there,
In the safety of its couch.

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Writes 24 Hours a day, 7 days a week. As long as he gets his free can of Coke.


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The Cat
Very well done. We all would like to keep
things close to our heart but there comes a time we must let it go. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 5, 2006 )





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