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Grog


We've all been in the Navy
Or something like it
We've all sucked that grog

It brings with it
Brittleness
To the green crinkle
Out before us

So that when we try
To fold it up
Into easy pocket size

We fall through
To find a thud of earth
Feet and fist
Can thrash




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johnlovejr at hotmail dot com


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The following comments are for "Grog"
by Flonigus

Grog
Well done. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 5, 2006 )

Grog
My name is Robert. I'm a lunatic.

Hi John.

Still standing,
RW


Indeed.





( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 7, 2006 )

Nautical types
I think that Navy guys are inherently free spirit. From my observation, it seems that Navy is a lot more relaxed branch of service, more intellectual, intensely interactive, and geographically fluid. And that of course, makes for great lovers. Why do I feel like the only horny reader here?

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 14, 2011 )





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