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lost you the first time
held you in a dance
given to shyness
never thought of
making you laugh

now it's hard to
get closer
and share my mind
so you see
how i've idealized you

your timid smile
you think nobody sees
holds me together
and lifts me off
like feathers

i dream of you
your black hair
now cut
but still flowing
like last spring

one shared word
would make my day
but i ask too much
and life's always hard
on people like me

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