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Heart of bronze
Soul of thought

Being of powers, within my love
Weakness of emotion, hold me fast

In life it seems slowed by fear
Strength of heart

Wisdom of soul
Becoming empty within my desire

Faded from rejections, so many
Sharing love, I so long to be

Giving all my heart
Offering my very soul

None will have what is within me
Always a stranger to others

Never more than a friend
In lonely tears I live onward

With a heart of bronze, I do weep
With this soul of thought, I do suffer

More than seems, less than known...

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