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Can I feel contentment,
when I still hold so many regrets of the past?
Fretting over inevitable decisions.
Should I have done this? Done that?
Unsuccessfully undoing these knots,
but getting tangled to brittle roots.
Shallow waters, tiny grains of sand.
Like stormy weather, and someone’s hand
Unable to command, unable to get free
Unpredictable, and in a moment,
all can change, if I just -
Escape, release myself from these
plagued shadows in my corrupted mind.
That knows all too much, the meaning of,
fragility, of mortality.
Escape and achieve -
Unachievable contentment?



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