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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

THE ANNIHILATION OF CLASSICAL MUSIC
Who has annihilated classical music? A guy who has just lost his conjugal relationship thinks the reason is explicable, and it can be effected by vicious out resource.
He stared at his mildewed violin; a common peopleˇ¦s first instinct after the monstrous scene may be clean it immediately, but he is not so mundane, his concept has transcended what a mundane human may think.
At night he cluster many of his friendˇ¦s advice, after whole nightˇ¦s refine, he picked up the prime one, he enter a grove and pick out a sequence of grape casually, then back home, put the sequence of grape in comparison with the mildew construction picked up by nipper below microscope, he see the cells develop in bustle.
It really scared him; he does not wish to have the mildew furnish his violin.




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