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Tommy Boy
Don't mess
with the rich man's

Heeded not the warnings
Ended up being
a skillet lunch
Little black book missing

Kacee Huggs

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The following comments are for "Above the Oasis Bar Mystery"
by Nitz Kitty

Above The Oasis Bar Mystery
Another one well done Kacee...

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 28, 2006 )

This really did happen in my hometown in the 60s...The little black book was said to hold many well known names...and not to be too gross ...three body parts were frying in a skillet on the stove...How did I find out? I knew a reporter...but I'll never tell who...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 28, 2006 )

Above the Oasis Bar Mystery
another slice of murder and mystery. both brutal and intriguing. You've got a real talent for these, and I'd loved you see more of them.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

Shannon/ murder
I've always been a detective of sorts..loved cold cases and wanted to put them to bed...thought once I might want to be a PI but I don't drive...or work in CSI field...but can't stand the smells...all I can do is write about the cases...The only reason this one was never solved is ...I think a prominent citizen was involved...although I love writing about this type of thing ...I don't want to limit myself to one subject... I'm sure there will be more to come..thanks for the comment...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

Oasis Bar
How you managed to tell a rich story complete from beginning to end in 8 lines, just 23 words, amazes me.

You've done a splendid job with this one, Kacee, thanks for sharing!

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

I like everything to be short and sweet...shorthand if you will...and I took many sign language classes... where one sign could say a whole sentence...Sad but true cold case...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

Thanks for reading and rating...I liked your cats and dogs...Kacee

Ps to Meghan...thanks for stopping by and reading....I appreciate your comments

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

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