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Dear Callus
by penumbra (Member) - published: August 28, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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Sometimes when you search for Sengir
you only get the cards and the game
never the legend you craved for,
the hirsute scavenger with my face

Didn't you notice the last time I typed
"In yews no harm, do what you can"
I got nothing and I knew there should
have been at least an apologetic error

Now I have no intention of getting you
involved in this since you've already
warned me of my unacceptability and
inadequacy

Let me finish, my careless Apathy.


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by penumbra

Intriguing
I have no idea what this is about. But years ago I was an obsessive MTG player, so I got the first stanza, at least!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: August 28, 2006 )





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