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Close your eyes,
Lay back,
Go into the deepest part of me,
Where the water's are green,
Where the birds fly high,
Where the nights are long,
Where the days are warm,
Where we can be together,
Where the music flows,
Where you are safe,
Where nothing can hurt you,
Where no one exists but us,

This is how you make me feel.
This is what its like.

Where we can bath in the sunlight.
And no one exists but us.

This is me when I am with you,
This is what your like.

This is what you mean to me.


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The following comments are for "This is what you mean to me"
by MaleOrderedNurse

Sweet
Warm, tender, touching and pleasant. Besides a few minor grammatical errors, this is wonderful.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 27, 2006 )

Beautiful Picture
I've read several of your writings. Whoever you are writing about, is a very lucky person.

Did you ever read any of Average Englishman's postings? I think you would like them. You will understand why when you read them.

( Posted by: pulsewriter [Member] On: September 5, 2006 )





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