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A collision of minds
sparks caught in the wind
giving birth to new ideas
to explore and wander freely

An ocean of uncertainty
a mountain of mishaps
challenges overcome
brought forth into the light

A new world view
they started to see the way
turning from war and greed
to peace and harmony

The ancients had it right
whatever they believed
( as above, so below )
but to live as one
with sky and earth
a divine inheritance
within each soul

A subconcious serenity
a concious goal
searching for something
that's already there
we eventually fade to dust
blowing gently in the air

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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