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Sparkly vision
and tingley toes
a trip through galaxies
an eternity of stories untold
wisdom learned
while intellectual flames burned
and I continued my journey
to another world
knowledge was gained
to set us free
I began to pull my spirit
back into my body
in with a ZAP!
jump to my feet
the knowledge I had gained
overloaded my brain
I fell to the floor
and twitched for a few
some call it the bacon
once it was over I knew
I tried to learn too much at once
and had a short circuit in my brain

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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