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Like puzzle pieces falling out,
I barely remember how they were.
I see gaps I try to fill up,
But they'll never be like before.

Pieces keep falling as the gaps grow.
Fear and sadness, now all I know.
Some pieces are fixed, far from all.
I fear, I'm so scared, who's next to fall?

-Charles


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The following comments are for "Puzzled Pieces"
by ManusFrigus

Puzzled Pieces
Very well done. thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 28, 2006 )





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