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Nothing matters anymore,
If i could only see u now
for about an hour,
Well i'd give u a thousand reasons why,
tonight u should break me off
I should hate you,
but i can't be bothered.

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by roxy929

At first I wasn't sure whether I liked the user of "u" instead of "you". (It's obviously deliberate)
hmmmm... Yes, I think I do like it. It's the sort of thing I don't normally like at all, but it seems to work here - I think it fits with the apathy of the peice (of the first and last lines especially), as well as the sadness. In fact, the whole poem fits together pretty well. Well done.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: November 17, 2002 )

you know i think your a female duplicate of me. i like this one alot.

( Posted by: Orion [Member] On: April 19, 2003 )

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