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She wears it on her right hand,
The heart in the middle of her bracelet,
She glances at it and remembers
that it was given to her by that special someone,
that told her that it was symbolic
of the piece of his heart that she will always have.

She wears another beautiful piece of jewlery around her neck.
The beauty is in the diamond
And also in the golden chain that it hangs from
But the shape of this piece of jewelry is most intriguing...
Its the shape of a teardrop ...
very much like the one that slid silently down his cheek
as she held him
on that incredible, intimate summer night.

This teardrop
Again symbolic
of the hurt and pain
Kept deep inside
Preventing him from wanting to feel or love again.
This woman is blessed
That he has let her in
as much as he has.



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