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As my calm and love is forced to turn inward
My lost anger and rage is forced to surface

Feelings of love, passion and kindness now buried
Emotions of hate, violence and destruction boil forth

Never allowed to be myself and accepted gracefully
Always challenged and slandered for my goodness

Leaving me to bloody and bruised, I raise up to kill or be killed
Preferring to love and hold, being forced to hide and die inside

Becoming as those who would deny me my heart and soul
Seeking how to return in kind this harm done to me

Mind full of rot, as my hatred bleeds from my veins
Let they who oppose me be cursed and fall prey to my will

Cross not my light side, remain safe within my loving soul
Deny my purity and create the monster within your soul

As I become that which you judge me to be,
beware your own Demon shall rage forth from within me

My desire for peace and love turned to war and death
My passion for holding and caressing turned to bashing and pain

Forcing me away from the one I love forces me from myself
Leaving a stranger with violent anger, rage and total hatred
Nothing that was me remains sane, beware I am not to blame

More than seems, less than known...

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The following comments are for "Hatred Bleeds From My Veins"
by MagnusVonMythos

Fierce and passionate. You can be as close to the one you love as you want. I wouldn't stop you. ;)

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 27, 2006 )

Well I Am Glad Someone Will
Seems everything and everyone is trying to keep me from her, I shall be victorious. I will not fail to be with her.

( Posted by: MagnusVonMythos [Member] On: August 29, 2006 )

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