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is that girl still mine?
or
is that she has forgotten all about me?

is she havin a real good time?
or
is she missin me?

is my girl somewhere all lone?
or
Is she with anotha man?

is she tryin to get back home?
or
is she hidin from me?

is she ever comin back?
or
is she listenin to her girls?

is she still walkin them lone country road ?
or
is she sittin on the porch?

is she starin at the same sky as me?
or
is she sleep ?

is those eyes of her's still callin?
or
is they dull and lost ?

is she still a friend of mine?
or
is she my enemy?


is she still that woman?


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