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Sometimes,
If you please
Nana bakes treats
Nice fresh muffins
Blueberry and cornbread
Fattening and savory

Hansel intentions perhaps?

Alas, schemes foiled
Metabolism too high.


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The following comments are for "Nana's Kitchen"
by PeriwinkleMoses

Grandmas
They are always trying to fatten you up...too bad my metabolism works the other way...good job...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 24, 2006 )

Hansel
...hahahaha

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 24, 2006 )

Wicked
Fun poem. Your most coherent yet!

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: August 26, 2006 )





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