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And today she returns they say.
Truth is, she's not coming back,
She left before they took her.
She fled a life of black.

She knew and she still does now,
It's not a joyous life she fled.
Emptiness that filled her and
The normal life she led.

Will she be home, will I see her?
It's been so long, she's been away.
She'll be in bed, but better?
She just returns they say.


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by ManusFrigus

She'll return
This reminds me a bit of my own life. Up and moving constantly. I try not to think too much about why I'm like that, but this poem gave me reason to consider it.

Thanks for posting this.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 20, 2006 )

chinadoll
Thank YOU chinadoll, art is just art when it doesn't mean, say, or move anything or anyone. I'm glad you feel that way, I'll try to post more often.

( Posted by: ManusFrigus [Member] On: August 24, 2006 )





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