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Do you even know you tease me?
Do you understand my world?
Do you even know you tease me,
Do you, evil girl?

Oh, have you no bit of mercy?
And have you no sense of guilt?
Oh have you no bit of mercy,
For what for you I've felt?

Could you please stop it young women?
Stop these tempting actions please.
Could you please stop it young women?
I'm not immune to tease...

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The following comments are for "Tease"
by ManusFrigus

He can write
He can write I tell you. Yes, cold hands here has taken the time to post :D
Welcome to LIT again man. Post more of your stuff, it'll be well recieved.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: August 18, 2006 )

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