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reaching new lows-
ones that demand
i dig deeper
than ever before.
to bury any trace within
the creases of my brow-
how it should vex me…

yet i ride the dizzying highs of
waves brought upon a
tide of tears-neither pained,
nor joyous. just necessary.
ride these waves to crash into
the calm of your eyes lakes.

the anticipation of, the desire for
impending destruction.
me, you, anyone near
whom id wish to protect
at the crest of a pyre,
pushed to self sacrifice
to jump on the cross
so that i might
crash, burn and hang,
exhuming scorched earth past
to savour the penance.

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