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What ever happened to romance?
To chocolate, candles and lace?
To whispers, seranades and caresses
and slow dancing with easy grace?

What ever happened to strolling
On a lazy summer day?
With picnics spread in a grassy field
WHile laughing children play?

What ever happened to chastity
And cherishing love all of your days?
Old fashioned honor and holding most dear
Are but flotsom on wild ocean waves.

So come, my love, and walk with me
In the warm pale moon lit night.
Come talk with me and laugh with me
And love me 'til morning's light.





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The following comments are for "True Romance"
by The demure 1

Romance
Love it! Perfect rhythm, flows well, and the subject matter has a timeless appeal. Hope you and your hubby can go on one of those walks soon.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: August 15, 2006 )

Classic Love
Well done. You haven't wandered from the classics.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )

True Romance--Demure1
So pretty and sweet. I like this one.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )

Wendy
What indeed...check your PMs...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )

Romance
I am a sucker for romance - sorry!! Thank you for your kind comments. My work can be very emotionally draining and I was trying to think of positive things. This little poem popped up and demanded to be taken seriously. Thanks to my sweet husband for helping me fix the last verse and for promising to keep romance alive!

( Posted by: The Demure 1 [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )

good one!!!
hello demure 1! I really like this work it is very good and flows nicely. keep up the good work!!

( Posted by: wally 5 [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )

romantic
i like romance and I wish more knew how to be that way. some are just so dumb about it. i'm the one who gets my boyfriend choclateswhen he should be givng me flowers or soemthing duh. hint hint to you dumbheads.

( Posted by: tomasini [Member] On: August 16, 2006 )





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