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Time has since passed
Turning the once magnificent
Sand castle I built to a single grain of sand
Comming back to where it once stood
There is not even a pitiful mound of sand
To serve as a historical marker

Author's note:
Yeah, this was depressed me whining. I'm talking about how I came back to the place I 'fell in love' and there is a total absence of anything. It felt to me a black hole with a giant band-aid slapped over it. But this little feeling I am over for the most part. It's kinda hard to look over a thing or person that changed your life. But I am looking more towards what will come tomorow (completely exausting!!!!) and not dwelling on the past, even if I do see 'ghosts' from time to time.

Mad monkey fling poo!

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