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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

HOW CANCER DESTROYS HER WELL-BEING LIFE
Inside the sublime building, the cells of cancer has permeated inside her body reticently, every night macabre scene would come to her dream, cancer depraves her healthy bit by bit, what a brutal journey she has to tolerate in her coming life! The news of her sick has despair her fiancÚ, earlier her doctor has warned she is vulnerable, nothing can energize her any longer, since the brutal disease will soon annihilate her, it is explicable that why her conjugal relationship will end soon, what a vice she has, but as every cancer patients know, being investigated cancer is revelation, no body can except it. Eating mildew-contained food can also make it easy to get cancer, yes, in mundane contemporary world now, cancer is also a monstrous disease




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