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She reminds me
of my younger days
long gone, still here
she just reminds me
an old spirit and a childs heart
she floats along
glowing with life
A wingless, quiet angel
and her eyes are full
overflowing with light knowledge
here to tell me the meaning
taking me on a journey
within myself
a beacon in the darkness
a light to guide the way
I follow in peace
to her vibrant garden
of shadowy flowers
and overgrown vines
She welcomes me
with open arms
no voices needed
we sit in silence
exchanging words
that no one can hear
in a tone of colour
and in languages of light
connected and joined
with the pattern of life

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~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for "Mystic Maiden"
by twistymisty

Mystic Maiden
very well done. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 6, 2006 )





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