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I wonder if it will be held against me
If everything goes wrong, if my only answer is a song
The only difference now is that I could never forget how
To like you, to hold you and kiss you
I wouldn't be content without your consent
You could be it all but I can't get up after a fall
There is nobody and everybody but me
Subconscious writings couldn't help save things
Quiet recollection just makes the emotion strengthen
It's hard not to compare you to something I once knew
Gone now a short walk without the right to talk
But what my mind thinks isn't all of my feelings
So what I say isn't what I mean today
Tomorrow is another day for things to hover
In my mind next to the things I can't find
And among the rest of those who haven't passed the test
Among the girls who were never what you are in my world
You still don't realize the thoughts that pass through my eyes
I never needed anything more then what you've given forth
Beautiful as yourself

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The following comments are for "Beauty Alone"
by xenosss

poetry
that was beatiful

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )





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