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abc
where friends
along came
defg
and they became friends
with abc
along came
hij
and abcdefg felt they
were in the way
along came
klmnop
and they became friends
with hij
now we have abcdefg best friends
now we have hijklmnop best friends
hij doesn't like abc
and abc doesn't like hij
defg doesn't like hij
and hij doesn't like defg
klmnop
reached out to abc
and abc shut out klmnop
klmnop
reached out to defg
and defg shut out klmnop
so hij and klmnop
became hijklmnop
along came
qrstuv
and they liked hijklmnop
but abcdefg shut out
qrstuv
along came
wxyz
and they became friends
with klmnop
and wxyz reached out to
abc
but abc shut out
wxyz
and wxyz reached out to
defg
but defg shut out wxyz
now what we have is
abcdefg
who won't play with
hijklmnopqrstuv
or wxyz
so hijklmnopqrstuv
are not best freinds
and wxyz
are now best friends
hijklmnopqrstuv
and now
its hijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
best friends
n panic abc
reached out wxyz
but wxyz shut out abc
n panic defg
reached out wxyz
but wxyz
shut out defg
and now we have abcdefg
who won't talk to
hijklmnopqrstuvwxyz

along came 123
and then came 456
and then came 789
and they became best friends

now abc and defg
(who still have nothing to do
with hijklmnopqrstuvwxyz)

have shut out 123
have shut out 456
have shut out 789

along came 10
who became friends
with 123456789

and now
Abcdefg
is the true
minority













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The following comments are for "Alpha Minority"
by wanker

Letters & Numbers
Very creative, but I think it goes on too long. Enjoyed reading this one.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

alpha minority gomersoap
chaa!! it does go on for too long!

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

Love Hate
I hated what I read of yours yesterday, but I enjoyed this one! It's neat, creative. Clean up the spelling, maybe cut a few lines, and it coudl be great.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

Maybe
Maybe I should watch my spelling, too. ;)

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

Alpha Minority
I think I get it.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

alpha minority
thanks viper.
glad you got it, legs.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

Pain in the A$$ F^c-king Headache!
Reading this gave me a pain in the a$$ f^cking headache!

The abc verses xyz bullshit went on and on and on forever and would not f^cking END!

Clickity click click cliques, and and all their f^cking petty a$$ childish love and hate letters of "let's not talk to them" and "let's ignore them" and "let's
be friends with only them" but not "them over there" cause we don't like how they smell, how they look, what God they believe in, what politicians they vote for, or the way they talk!


I got it!



( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

The ABC's of Minorities
It's redundant. It's long. It makes-ah the brain kick into a granny-gear.

I have no clue why I liked it so much. I would lose the numbers though and end it as..

now we have abc and defg
(who still have nothing to do
with hijklmnopqrstuvwxyz)

Thus Abcdefg
is the true
minority


There's my $0.02.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

disenfranchised plebian masses & the status quo
status quo power politics and the majority plebian masses.

the abc and defg are the top dogs and founders, the status quo, who don't realize that they are no longer the majority. because of their exclusionary tactics and xenophobia they managed to alienate newcomers and they have backed themselves up into a minority corner. Alpha’s are still technically at the top and in power, but they are quickly becoming outnumbered.
Alphas rule through misuse of power, deception, manipulation, exclusion and cruelty. they never get it, never change.
They are hated by the plebian masses and the disenfranchised.


ABCDEFG are the status quo minority.
HIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ are the masses.
123456789 are the disenfranchised.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

ruling minority
ABCDEFG are the status quo ruling minority .
HIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ are the plebian masses.
123456789 are the disenfranchised.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

stupid
war of the masses, their struggles, infighting, favortisms, development of parties and cliques.

basically its about how stupid people are when they get caught up in their tiny world shit, neglect and abuse of each other.

use your own imagination and ask yourself where have you seen this shit? aren't you sick of it? I am.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

close enough
though so.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )





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