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Look out the window see the grey skies above
Hide behind sihlouettes waiting for an outcome
Behind plastic bars that were never really there
Find the stories of people neverwhere

Everyday nothing is just a little bit more of what I'm feeling
And all the cards I'm dreaming are just what life is dealing
Good balances out with the other twenty four hours of the day
While every eigth line is a rememberance to the love that got away

Fate and wired connections leave us all behind
Seem a little bit wanting but aren't we all a little blind
Desperate reachings and smilings at a girl
Knowing she'll never remember all the times we were

------ - Alternative Indie Rock for the masses

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