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some people call The Wanker
some people call me the gangsta of love
some people call me Maxwell

but you can call me Tyrone

cause I m gonna wank yo chain
cause I m gonna wank yo vain

cause I m gonna
cause I m gonna
ohhh, yes, I m gonna

I'm gonna wank you wank you wank you

W A AAA N K

you
all
night

alllllll

niiiight long




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The following comments are for "Gangsta of Love"
by wanker

I know Steve Miller...
...and you're no Steve Miller...(Perhaps, your first post is misdirection/lark..?)

wanker,

Haven't been around of late..Saw: "lyric," so checked it out...Have penned few over years..

Met Steve when 18. Born on his b-day. Wasn't kidding.

Welcome to Lit.

Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

steve miller who boby7?
i don't remember no GetoBoys names steve miller?
they wrote Gangsta of Love.

I'm gonna do the lyrics again cauze this is all wrong not what I had in gl stylin smuuth.


( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

Tyrone
I'm not very familiar with the Steve Miller Band, so I'm not sure what B7L is referencing - song about "Space Cowboy" or something?

Anyway, I think from a creative standpoint your lyrics are fairly derivative and have been done before in similar manner. A re-write is a good idea.

There is a song from the 1950's called "Gangster Of Love" by Johnnie "Guitar" Watson.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

Wanker
Bobby's referring to the fact that your lyrics are poorly plaigiraized from an excellent song by the Steve Miller Band. This seems to have been written by an illiterate drunk entertaining other illiterate drunks in a trailer, while a 40 watt bulb swings overhead.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )





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