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Last night while you slept
I snatched a flashlight
from the night stand,
gently spread your legs

apart, and performed
a thorough examination
of your vagina. I wanted
you to know, my love,

that, other than a slight
protrusion of the cystocele,
you are as healthy and pink
as a Carefree Beauty rose.



(summer - bolinas)




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The following comments are for "Doctor John's Love Poem."
by johnjohndoe

doctor john's vagina
Great poem.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 3, 2006 )

Boys Will Be Boys
Actually, I think this is a rather tender poem. Oddball & tender. Beauty is in the eye of the flashlight.

Very neat form, too.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

Erotice Nerd
John,

This is almost erotica, but much to odd -- could be humorous but is more nerd-like. Very different approach to what men think about all day, right? Did she wake up?

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

Doctor John
I have to agree with them all. Keep it up

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

Man . . .
. . . I just don't know what to say about this. It's unclassifiable, beyond my ken. It' so fucking weird. Its oddness keeps me coming back, looking at it anew, scratching my head. Love the way your mind works.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: August 4, 2006 )

This really turned me on, don't tell Bill, John..
I caught Bill doing this to me once. Bill doesn't know that I know. I pretended to be asleep throughout the entire exam. Before Bill there was Ben, and I caught Ben in the very same act of inspection! Men! Gotta love them flashlights and all! I adored this poem.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

My oh My Vagina,
Well, so much for keeping my dreams to myself. NOW everyone knows...

I am never open for business but at night. LOL.
Frick I am bad!!!!!

Florally whimsical, romantic....nah. Perverse, not even that. Reminds me of a little boy under the covers checking into old Sears Catalogues getting turned on at the underwear and not realizing what he truly was so aroused about.

I think this is a very good poem and you know something, I would love to read more like this.

Thanks for sharing this, great little poem.
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

rules of vagina flash engagement
Best Poem of 2006!

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

the vagina monologues
that was... sweet.. and then disturbing... and then hilarious. A very nice ride.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: August 6, 2006 )

good vagina...
poem.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 6, 2006 )

yuck


Well written and all, but I find your subject matter perverse and disgusting.

Nothing personal-

peace-

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: August 6, 2006 )





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