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Yesterday I wanted to talk to you
Speak of all our times together
I got the sense that you didn't want to
Above all remember you're important to me

You taught me so many things
I derive from your teaching
Today, it makes me who I am
But without you Iím helpless

Something different now,
Itís as though Iím all alone
It what makes me turn away
Turn away

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