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Peace! Harmony! Illusions of grandeur!
Fireless skies & Tearless cries,
Mysteries of the afterlife.

She came in a dream
"Don't scream!"
Crimson eyes penetrate
depths of mind, space of time

AWOKEN!
What world is this I see?
Real or Fantasy?
A world of peace, of harmony,
Dangled over the fires of
E T E R N I T Y
What message to be seen?

Are you alive? Or do you hide?
Do you live? Or just reside?
STOP!
THINK!

How much time? Until the mysteries unravel,
Before your eyes
Is this the end? Or just the beginning?
Do we pretend? Or are we just kidding?

BLIND!
By choice? Or state of mind?
Confusion helps to pass the time




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~~~D.E.N.T.T~~~


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The following comments are for "She Came in a Dream"
by dentt

She Came In A Dream
Very well written loved it. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )





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