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Thoughts of me,
Thoughts of she,
Thoughts of the reasons of we,
Of why we be,

Life isnít a glee,
Without the friends we need,
Close and dear,
Inseparable indeed,

Life is the journey we pursue,
Encountering people, establishing bonds tighter then hardened glue,
Laughter, fun and smiles passed on as if it were the flu,
Respect, honor and humanity, things we learn and live when we remain to ourselves true,

Time passes and our lanes split up,
Separate but united we stay,
Together in mind, body and soul,
With a bit of luck we face reestablishment of the highway which once was

Go ahead and wipe the tears,
Smile and prays,
For we will always be,
Go and have fun; see you soon...my peers.





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The following comments are for "Thoughts of me"
by deraj

Ode to your friendship?
What a beautiful piece...it sounds like an ode. I have been writing many odes lately; perhaps you would like to read them. I commend you on this work: I can see the talent and thought in it.

-ArsPoet2789ica

(P. S.: One of my odes does not have the word 'ode' in the title: it is called "A Tour of Bossier City").

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 2, 2006 )

Thought Of Me
I really like this it is written with such feelings. Keep it up. Thanks for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )

thx
wanda: thx for your comment i appreciate it.

ars: yeah it kinda is one :D. i will check your pieces out. i have read various and liked them. most of the time my friend, siah, has already said what i was thinkin 2 :D. thx for your comment.

( Posted by: deraj [Member] On: August 9, 2006 )

Deraj
Swa, nice piece here. Summer blues maybe? I feel the same way about our friends leaving, its a sad feeling. I also recommend you to read some of Aubri's poetry, especially her 'journal'
deraj, see you soon on the flipside.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: August 13, 2006 )

Itam Deraj
Late, I know, but I second this motion, I feel ur pain, I share the thought and hopes, JD nos ta siguiente.

( Posted by: ManusFrigus [Member] On: August 26, 2006 )





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