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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

¡§What a beautiful stem of tulip it is¡¨, everybody appreciated it when they come by our new cabin, they all said they are privileged to admire such a pretty flower, some come-by even asked if we can vend it, some of them even want to beat down with me¡Koh~~ my arithmetic facility is not so good, all the warlike scene is played with repetition in front of my eyes¡K
The measurement of my garden is spacious, with a lifelike scene; those flowers were grown up by the repetition of watering everyday by me and my wife in turn. We cultivate them as they are my own children.
But today, I don¡¦t know what¡¦s come up, a cluster of veiled guys hustled into my house, they shouted and screamed ¡§one senator hate you¡¨, I enjoined them not to do it, but it seems my injunction resulted in fail. All of a sudden, one of them pawed and blurred all the flowers in my garden with facility, 3 minutes later, they escaped.
After that, I saw all the background and the damaged flowers were not in parallelism, we all moaned why are this gang are in a statue of incivility sullenly, what¡¦s wrong did I do to make an officer to repay me like that way? We run our business in what government prescribes us to do,
Should I sue them? I am in readiness to do that¡K

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