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Love forbidden is love forsaken

Unconditional love is divine,
why not the love of mankind

Love thy brother as thy love thyself,
yet to judge and score them we do

All men are created equal,
yet he is to old,
she is to young,
he is black,
she is yellow,
why then are we divided

Do unto others as you would wish done unto yourself,
has become do unto others before they do unto you

Forbidden love, love judged to be unlawful
Forbidden love, love taken away and shamed
Forbidden love, love unheard drifts away
Forbidden love, love used for selfish pride
Forbidden love, love rejected for greed of gold

Love learned is love known
Love given is love pure
Love pure is love learned

Allow love not to be forbidden when given,
for it is not a sin to give in to love

More than seems, less than known...

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The following comments are for "Forbidden Love"
by MagnusVonMythos

I liked this one. If everyone in this world could think like the way you do, then it would have been a heaven on earth.

Thanks for posting.


( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: July 31, 2006 )

Thank you and you are right...
So vey many times thruout history has love been cast aside for the persuit of greed, lust and other selfish reason. Also far to many couples have been destroyed by their so called friends and family. The heart and soul knows what is best for it, all should respect that and allow love to take its natural cource and not interfear. I have seen such powerful and pure love within the eyes of a child of the age of 13, I myself at the age of 9 know the truth and power of real love. Age is not a viable way to judge is someome is able to love, it is how they are raised and taught and how they themselves understand love. Thank you for your comment.

( Posted by: MagnusVonMythos [Member] On: July 31, 2006 )

Forbidden Love
Very true thanks for writing this one.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 3, 2006 )

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