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Lord, I know something wrong with me
I just wanna know what's the matter

It seems as though I never changed
I just wanna know what's the matter

Grown up in Louisiana and having the land
just try Lord, i'm asking, please help me
understand

My woman done left me
My children hate me
and i have no talent

i'm buzzed and high and
i just wanna know what's the matter

Lord you know what's with me
tell me,somebody,what's wrong


I just wanna know what's the matter


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The following comments are for "Untitled Prayer"
by Bran

God's Healing Power
I suppose that we all feel that way sometimes, but that feeling is one of the ways that God brings us closer to Him. And when we come to Him, the bad emotions drain away. One of the ways that I view God is that I believe that He is a natural, non-toxic Drano that cleans our soul sewage system out. It's really good to know that God can be so great.
And don't forget that there is always someone out there, in addition to God, who loves you, and that you do have talent. If you didn't have talent, then you wouldn't be on this website pouring your emotions out with such vivid poetry.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 2, 2006 )

Untitled prayer
This is a poem straight from the aching bones. Stripped of love and everything that could possibly matter, there's a nakedness to the subject and a deep longing for things to be made right that immediately caught my attention.

In other words, very good in my opinion.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: August 2, 2006 )

Untitle Prayer
I have to agree with chinadoll and Arspoet.
This a well written work of emotions.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: August 5, 2006 )





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